Finally…

Posted in Mystery Novels, What I'm Reading, Writing a Novel on May 7th, 2010 by Virginia — 3 Comments

Today was last day of class, got to set up my desk for Monday and it was like Christmas.  New PC, new phone, new everything, now to be able to actually do it. Will probably hold off on decorating my cubicle because they already said they are moving our department to the other end of the building in June and would rather not move too much stuff so I will just focus on doing a good job for now.

Worked a little bit, very little bit, on my novel this week but plan to make up for it this weekend and next week as my hours will change.  I will be going in later in the day so plan to fit in a bit of writing each day before I go. 

My first article in Women’s Edition came out this week and I also received my first check so even though I have been published before this, I can now say I am a professional writer because of that dandy little check. This photo is the May issue and the article is a profile of The Iowa Vein Center in the Healthy Living section. You can read it online too at www.WomensEdition.com.

Planning to attend the West Des Moines Library Writers Group in the morning with friend Sara. That is always interesting.  So many talented writers in one room and each time we meet I get another installment of their stories. 

Currently still reading ‘The Last Will of Moira Leahy’. It is a well developed story that reads more like a mystery than a romance but there is an inkling of a romance still to come. It bounces back and forth from the present to the past and is about twins, Moira and Maeve Leahy. So far the present day story is being told by Maeve and I haven’t yet found out what happened to Moira but little hints have been dropped along the way.  It is a nominee for RWA’s first novel category and I can see why it was chosen.  Very well written story with a unconventional mystery. Though I want to finish it to find out what is really happening, I will feel bad when it’s over because I’ve enjoyed spending time with the characters.

My netflix fix for the weekend is ‘The Mysterious Affair at Styles’. I’m slowly reading the Agatha Christie novels and decided it might be fun to watch the movie or show (whatever Netflix has available), after reading the book.

Will post again soon,

Virginia

Beautiful Sunday

Posted in Novel Writing, What I'm Reading on May 2nd, 2010 by Virginia — 3 Comments

My Sundays off are winding down to an end.  As a Realtor, I worked most Sundays so having them off has been a treat but I will adjust to Saturdays and Tuesdays off. 

I’ve been working on my novel, not necessarily adding to word count but developing the story more.  I have also been reading everything I can get my hands on about the writing process with both novels and freelancing. 

Books I picked up this week are, – ‘Making A Good Writer Great – A Creative Workbook for Screenwriters’.  I’ve perused this book a little and it has some great suggestions for the creative process. It has a suggesting to start out writing a letter to yourself about why you love the idea for your script.  I’m not planning to write a script but I am taking these suggestions for my novel and adapting.  There are also lots of exercises for the creative writing process.  Unfortunately, I found this book at our local used book store but I would guess you can probably find it on-line somewhere.  After posting this, I will check with Amazon and post a link. 

Another book I picked up is Therese Walsh’s ‘The Last Will of Moira Leahy.’ I belong to a local RWA (Romance Writers of America) chapter and for our May meeting, we chose this book to read and discuss because it was nominated as a best first novel this year.  As a group, we want to see what the writer did right and how it could help with our own work.  I read an excerpt of this book and decided that it sounded like something I would like, I then went on-line and saw the cover and was sold.  So far, I would say the marketing of this book is right on, it drew me in.  If you live in the Des Moines, IA area and are interested in writing romances, feel free to contact me for information about attending a meeting. I am also a member of a new local Sisters in Crime chapter and the invitation is open for that, as well.

I did finish reading ‘The White Garden – A Novel of Virginia Woolf”, and found it a well written mystery.  Stephanie Barron is the author.  If you read mysteries you may have read some of her Jane Austen series.  I would recommend it to all the mystery buffs that like a bit of history with their mystery. 

Plan to get some words written this week on my own novel and will post my progress as I go.  Hope everyone has a wonderful week.

Keep writing,

Virginia

Wanting to write…

Posted in Uncategorized on April 27th, 2010 by Virginia — 1 Comment so far

This is the last week of formal training at work.  Since Feb 8th we’ve covered auto insurance, billing, homeowners, dwelling fire, umbrella and now we are doing a quick once over for specialty products.  Tomorrow is our last day of formal training.  Thursday, we job shadow in the morning and role play in the afternoon.  This is our fourth time to shadow and role play.  I enjoy this part of the training because we get a taste for what the real job is like.  The people I have job shadowed seem so competent.  They keep saying to give it a few months and it will come.  I don’t have any fears with talking to people on the phone because I’ve had to do that a lot in several past positions.  The worrisome part is being able to find the correct answers within the suggested time frame allowed for each call.  Everyone keeps saying strive for accuracy and speed will come.  I am going to have to trust that they are right. 

As far as my writing goes, I sent my June article to my editor.  My deadline was May 3rd but I feel better getting it out early.  If something needs to be changed or fixed, I figure it gives me time.  I’m also hoping the May issue of Women’s Edition will be out soon, just so I can see it in print. 

I have been doing character work as well as brainstorming plot ideas with my novel.  Trying to get myself back into the story.  I’ve been away so long, can’t remember where I was going with it.  By working on the development part of it a little more it should pull me back in so I can start writing each day until I am finished.  I still like the concept for the story but after Nano, I knew it was going to need some major work before I would be happy with it. 

I am currently reading ‘The White Garden’ by Stephanie Barron.  It’s a novel of Virginia Woolf.  It’s all fiction but it feels like it could be possible.  It involves the protagonist Jo’s search for the truth about her Grandfather who committed suicide recently and if he had any connection with Virginia Woolf’s last days.  I won’t tell anymore because I don’t want to spoil it for anyone.  The writing style is one I enjoy.  Very readable and if I had more time, I probably would have completed it by now.  I take it to work and when we have a lull in class time, I pick it up instead of chatting like most of the class tends to do.

Now I head off to bed to do a little character work on my story.

Happy writing, until next time.

Virginia

Wet but Interesting Weekend

Posted in Uncategorized on April 25th, 2010 by Virginia — 2 Comments

I met with the West Des Moines Library group Saturday.  It’s always enjoyable attending this meeting and hearing what everyone has written since last we met.  This group has been meeting to critique for several years now and there are a handful of steady writers who attend each time.  It meets from 10 AM – 1PM the 2nd and 4th Saturdays of each month.  The stories are as diverse as the writers.  We have men and women who range in age from their twenties to probably sixties who write novels, short stories and poetry. We have even had a screenwriter at one time.  The group is open to the public so it ebbs and flows with the seasons and the weather.  We have had some meetings with only three people and then there have been times when there had to have been at least a dozen.  One member Shawna, is a young mother who brings her small well-behaved daughter sometimes when her Chef husband is unable to watch her.  She writes children’s stories as well as a blog for a local television station.  I agreed to meet her for lunch Sunday, before another local group meets in the afternoon.

Sunday I finished my June article for Women’s Edition.  My deadline is May 3rd so I put it away for a couple days so that I can pull it out and re-read it to make sure I haven’t missed any corrections and plan to send it to my editor this week. 

Sunday afternoon, I stopped by the Cianano group that meets monthly at Smokey Row coffee shop. This is where I met Shawna. We both participated in the nanowrimo last year with this group.  Some members continue to meet monthly to critique and discuss writing related activities.  It’s always motivating to stop by and see what everyone is up to with their projects and just catch up.  It will probably be the last time I get to see them for a while because with my new job, I will be working Sundays very soon. 

All in all it was a good weekend. I plan to get more work done on my novel this week, since my article will be put to bed.  Now like my article I must put myself to bed.  Another day of work tomorrow.

In the meantime, keep writing.

Virginia

I am back!

Posted in Mystery Novels, Novel Writing, What's Happening, Write a Novel on April 23rd, 2010 by Virginia — Comments Off

I have to apologize for ignoring my blog. I will not do it again.  It started with my job search last fall, then working as a temp with an on again, off again schedule and then I got a real job and have been in training since February 8th.  I will be through with training May 10th and will then be a Customer Service Rep for a large insurance company here in Iowa. 

With the training winding down, I have been able to turn my focus back a little more toward writing.  Besides my real job, I have started free-lancing one article a month for Women’s Edition.  My first article will appear in the May issue in the Healthy Living section.  I interviewed the owner of The Iowa Vein Center.  I have already received my next assignment for June and will give you more information about that at a later date.

Avid (Authors Visiting in Des Moines), an event the Des Moines Library puts on each year has taken off.  I had a fantastic evening out with my Ya-ya sisters to see Peter Hedges.  If you ever get a chance to go to one of his book signings, go.  He is very entertaining.  Maybe it is more interesting because he is from West Des Moines and whenever he appears, he always has family, friends and former school teachers show up to hear him.  He gets all emotional always makes me laugh and cry.  Got his latest book,  ‘The Heights’ autographed and it sits in my to be read pile. 

I have been a member of the local Romance Writers of America chapter for a while now and this past weekend became a charter member of the local Sisters-in-Crime chapter.  I have been working on my Nano book this week, trying to get myself back into the story. I’m re-working my character sketches and trying to put together a novel binder. This month’s speaker at my Iowa Romance Novelist meeting was Cheryl St. John and she talked about the story setting.  She also shared her binder she uses for each story. It contains all the information she needs to help her write her book.  So I have been trying to put this information together in a binder for my story.

 I have given up with the notion that I can post a “Write a Novel with Me” blog so will just try to post frequently about my own writing progress and if it helps with yours, that’s great.  Do, as always feel free to comment and share your experiences with me, I am a great listener and like to immerse myself in the process.

I have been reading a non-fiction book, ‘Agatha Christie’s Secret Notebooks.’  Along with it, I decided to read her novels.  I’ve finished ‘The Mysterious Affair at Styles’ and ‘The Secret Adversary’.  Because I have so many books to read, I plan to slip a few others between the Christie novels.  I just started reading ‘The White Garden’, a novel of Virginia Woolf after my friend Sara recommended it.  I will probably try to write a few book reviews for some of the books, in the future.

I do have a few more author interviews to post and would love to help promote other authors too, so watch for more interviews as they become available.

Have a great weekend and keep writing!

Introducing Sarah Oltrogge

Posted in Author Interviews on March 4th, 2010 by Virginia — 1 Comment so far

A handful of women attended the movie ‘The Divine Secrets of the Ya-Ya Sisterhood’ and have been calling themselves Ya-Ya’s ever since.  Several years ago I was asked to join this group of writers who critiqued and offered support and motivation to each other as we each struggled along our separate paths toward publication. Over the years, we’ve taken turns meeting in each of our homes to critique, attended book signings when authors came to Des Moines and also spent several weekends in retreat at a magical Victorian home in Woodbine.  We’ve been lucky enough to have two members publish.  The first was Kali Vanbaale and the most recent is Sarah Oltrogge. 

Tell us a little bit about yourself.

I grew up in Clear Lake, Iowa, which is weird to say you’re actually fromClear Lake, since it’s such a huge tourist and resort town, that is to say, a temporary summer home for most. People would have the same reaction if I’d told them I lived in the Sleeping Beauty Castle at DisneyLand. I graduated from Iowa State University with a degree in Journalism/Mass Communication. My first professional job after graduating was working as a reporter and editor at the weekly Dallas County News in Adel, Iowa. Although I hated the long and varied work hours and the pressure to find the news, I learned so much about my fellow humans on that job. I learned how to write compelling stories and interview people in a way that got them to open up. I stayed there for three years (a record in that industry), and then moved into a job with the state – at first with the Department of Human Services, and for the last 10 years, with the Department of Cultural Affairs, where I write for the department newsletters and graphically design promotional materials (and a bunch of other fun stuff).

 

Tell us about your book that just came out.

The East Village neighborhood in downtown Des Moines has a long and fascinating history, dating to the very beginnings of the City. It’s a story that begins with a power struggle to secure the site of the State Capitol in Des Moines and the growing separation that followed of the east side of downtown “versus” the west side of downtown. The location of the State Capitol was a coup for the east side, which soon became the industrial business center of the city. The railroads, lumberyards and an influx of immigrants working in these industries flourished on the east side. By mid-century, a more mobile population and the rise in popularity of suburban living, complete with new shopping centers, or “malls,” drew people away from downtown. Railroad travel and transport became less and less popular. And businesses in East Village suffered as a result. Through the 1970s and 1980s, the east side was worn down, and had a reputation as “the bad side of town.” By the 1990s, city leaders felt they had to take action and proposed an ultimatum: either present a plan to fix up the neighborhood, or we’ll tear it all down and build new. A study was commissioned and the neighborhood started to turn. A well-known architect purchased some of the older buildings and began renovating. A new streetscape helped business owners and incoming residents take pride in their neighborhood. The snowball effect had begun, and continues today with new development and ever increasing interest in East Village has a hip and happening part of downtown, a model of urban revitalization.

 

Where did you get the idea for this book?

I was actually approached to do this book back in the summer of 2008. As president of the Historic East Village, Inc. Board of Directors, I received some information about this particular series of history-related books from Arcadia Publishing. The letter they sent me asked if I knew of anyone who would be interested in doing a book on East Village. I thought about it for awhile, maybe a couple weeks, until finally, I thought hey, I could do this! So I wrote up my proposal/outline, submitted it and signed a contract to begin work in September 2008.

 

What is your writing day like?

I spent months researching, searching for images that would help tell the dramatic story of East Village. I interviewed people I knew had been in the neighborhood a long time and found that many were helpful and excited about the book. I didn’t actually start writing and pulling together all my research until May, 2009. My deadline was Aug. 4, 2009. It was soooooo hard to sit inside during those summer months and write and work on the book. But I pushed myself. I knew I had to do it. I would go to my day job for eight hours, come home and immediately sit down to the computer. By July, I was working all day then coming home every night to work on the book for four to five hours. Weekends were at least eight hours per day concentrated solely on the book. A lot of it was fact checking, then trying to arrange the pieces to tell the story in a sensible way. Since this was my first time on a project like this, I will know better next time how to pace myself!

 

Whose writing influences you?

Several years ago, I picked up a book that was tossed onto the freebie pile in the State Historical Museum gift shop. It was “How to Read and Unwritten Language” by Philip Graham (www.philipgraham.net). When I finally got around to reading it, I was absolutely floored with the way he strung words together. It was so lyrical, I found myself stopping reading from time to time to absorb the words and their sentiments. It was exactly the way I have tried to emulate my fiction writing and some day, when I finally find the story that becomes a novel, I imagine I will have Philip Graham looking over my shoulder.

 

Do you have some advice for unpublished authors?

I think, from my point of view and my history as a journalist, I would advise writers to not be offended by critique. I’ve sat in more than a few writing groups where people will share their life’s work, and the moment someone mentions how they might improve upon a scene, tighten a dialogue or move the story forward, the writer becomes dismissive. Birthing a novel like birthing a baby: there’s excitement in the beginning, a middle full of doubt and a lot of pain and screaming at the end. But when all is said and done, you’ve got this little piece of yourself venturing out into the world, looking up at the sky with arms wide open saying, “Here I am!”

Thanks Sarah.

My husband Steve spent most of one evening reading Sarah’s book.  Since we have always lived in Des Moines, he found the pictures fascinating.  While in high school, we used to scoop the loop and he remembered a lot of the old businesses that have been replaced or renovated, especially the pizza place at the foot of the capital.  He enjoyed it so much, he suggested I buy a second copy for his father for Father’s Day.  If anyone else is interested in purchasing a copy, Sarah will be signing books this Saturday, March 6th at the Barnes and Noble on University in West Des Moines from 2-4.  I’ll see you there.

Meet Ryan Sloth

Posted in Guest Blog on February 14th, 2010 by Virginia — Comments Off
Ryan is another local author I met at the Author Festival last fall in Des Moines.  He also has some connections with the Iowa Barnstormers.  I’m thrilled to have Ryan as a guest blogger this month.   

Sammy Sloth Sport Superstar

I grew up in Belmond, Iowa and went to college at Iowa State to play football. After college I played a couple years in California and Ohio. Then I moved back to Ames in 2005. Where I currently live with my wife – Heidi, son – Tucker, daughter – Taylor.

I have always enjoyed writing since my high school days. I will write a little bit in my spare time.

I write stories that kids would enjoy. I like to write about sports or events in my life.

My publisher is Tate Publishing. They are a Christian based company out of Oklahoma City. They have a large staff that has been very helpful. I’ve worked with several individuals in all of the different departments and they all have been great.

Sammy Sloth Sport Superstar is my first book.

I’m pretty busy with other jobs. I coach football for the Iowa Barnstormers which keeps me busy. If I have a free day I may spend a little time working on a project. I actually enjoy substitute teaching because I have the opportunity to write while my class quietly works on assignments.

The sister of my wife’s friend had a book published about the same time I was researching a publishing company. I contacted her and asked several questions. She spoke very highly of the company. I did some research of my own and decided to send a manuscript to them. About two months later I received a phone call from Tate Publishing. They were excited to publish my book, as was I.

My kids book, Sammy Sloth Sport Superstar, just came out on March 24. So, it has been available for 9 months now.

I’m working on the sequel to Sammy Sloth. I’m super pumped about this book. I can’t wait for it to come out. Hopefully in a year. I have also been working on a movie script. After having the opportunity to act in We Are Marshall and Leatherheads, I wanted to write a football movie as well. I have a great story to tell, but it just takes forever to write. Kids books are a lot easier.

 Eventually you will get published and it is an incredible feeling to see your book come together for others to read. Be proud of your work. But once you get the book published, you must work even harder to get it out there. The publisher may help you set up book signings and place your book in stores, but it takes a lot more than just that. Always be thinking of ways to promote your book. Find your target audience and look for ways to sell it to them. For instance, I go to elementary schools and give a 30 minute presentation to all of the grades. I then give the kids the opportunity to purchase my book. I really enjoy interacting and having fun with the kids.

If any kid, parent, or teacher that is interested in having me come read to their class, I would be delighted. I talk to each grade for about 30 minutes. I tell them a little about my experiences playing football, coaching football, being an actor in two football movies, and of coarse the writing process. I enjoy telling them about sloths along with the characters in my book. I encourage them to read and work hard in school. I answer any questions and spend the last 5 minutes signing books for the kids. Anyone can email me at coachsloth@yahoo.com or call me at 515-867-3515. They can also find more info about me or my kids book, Sammy Sloth Sport Superstar, at www.coachsloth.com.

I also enjoy writing motivational quotes. My favorite one I like to share is…

“Life’s a movie and you’re the Star, so it’s time to put on a Show!” 

Ryan Sloth

 You have a real nice website. I also attached some pictures of my book. My Barnstormer bio page http://theiowabarnstormers.com/coaches.cfm?PlayerID=17

Thanks Ryan and be sure to let us know when the sequel comes out.

Virginia

Shutter Island

Posted in What's Happening on January 31st, 2010 by Virginia — 3 Comments

I have had ‘Mystic River’ in my to-be-read pile for quite sometime.  I haven’t seen the movie but I have seen the movie for ‘Gone Baby Gone’ and thought it was great.

The trailers for the movie ‘Shutter Island’ drew me in and I bought the book the other day.  Could not put it down.  Stayed up till 2:00 AM this morning and had to go to bed because I couldn’t keep my eyes open.  First thing this morning, I put on a pot of coffee and sat in my cozy reading chair and finished it.  It was so good.  I won’t spoil anything by telling you more about the story but if you like suspenseful mysteries, you have to read this one.  Now I am counting down the days for the movie.

Spent the afternoon with my writer friend Sara.  We like to get together at least once a week.  We usually meet at Barnes and Noble and we discuss writing and books.  We have both been struggling with finishing our most recent attempts at novel writing.  We have both been struggling with either trying to find a job or supporting a spouse who is trying to find a job.  I do think that has taken a little bit of the drive to complete the work – out of us.  On top of it, she had a trip to the Emergency Room recently and is waiting to follow up with her own doctor and because of a debilitating headache has found it hard to do anything, let alone write or read. 

I have gone back to basics and started reading ‘The Writer’s Book of Days’ again and doing the daily writing prompts.  I actually wrote a pretty good short story the other day, if I do say so myself.  Since I have published one short story in the past, I think I can tell when something might be worth sending out and this is the first story in a while that has jumped out at me and encouraged me to submit it somewhere.  This week I will edit and polish and start looking for a home for it. 

Doing the prompts has helped pull me out of whatever was holding me back with my writing.  It gives me something to warm up with before I jump into the story I started in November.  I think part of my problem was Nanowrimo.  Though it is a great way for me to get a huge amount of words written on a project, it also leaves me feeling a little disenchanted when it is all over.  I know it isn’t supposed to be perfect, it is a first draft but I spend so much time pumping it out that by the time the end of November comes, I’m getting burned out with the whole process.  I lose my desire to write.  The other thing that has made me slow down and reassess what I’ve been doing is the fact that though I am thrilled to be starting a new job next week, I know I will not have any time to take off to attend any kind of writing conference this year.  That fact took a little steam out of my sails.  But now I have something to look forward to next year.  I am going to take a little more time to finish my novel, continue writing some more short stories and start another novel this year.  Hopefully I can start planning to attend a few conferences in 2011.

I will have a new Write a Novel with Me post – hopefully tomorrow.

In the meantime keep writing,

Virginia

Week 4 – What to Do – Plot or Characters?

Posted in A Novel in 52 Weeks, Write a Novel, Write a Novel With Me on January 27th, 2010 by Virginia — Comments Off

At this point if you are a pantzer, you will probably start writing.  But if you are a plotter who needs a little direction, this is when you will probably need to decide whether to plot or create your characters.  Most of the how-to books suggest one or the other.  I usually do a combination of both; it depends on where my idea came from.  If I start out with a scene in my head, I usually take it the next step and find out how I got to that scene and where it needs to go.  I’m not suggesting you plot out the whole story here but plot enough to give yourself a little foundation.  I then start thinking about the characters.  What kind of character could get into this kind of a situation? 

If your spark of an idea comes from a character rather than a situation, now may be the time to work on developing this character and a few more.  Again, I’m not suggesting that you delve into total character development.  Maybe develop the protagonist and the characters immediately connected.  Then start looking at what kind of a story you’d like to share about this character.  What does this character have to tell?

Since the story, I’m working on started with a scene.  I wrote a draft of how I pictured that scene.  I then took the characters in that scene and started developing them.  I use a template that helps me to describe their physical appearance.  Then I start answering questions about their current situation, where they live, what kind of clothes they wear, what their occupation is, anything that helps me get to know the character better.  I then look at the past and try to create some history for that character.  What happened to them that brought them to where they are now, type questions.

I will get more in-depth with both plotting and characterization but this is where I stick my toe in the water to test the story.  I bounce back and forth between the plot and character, working on each character and storyline as it comes to me.  This practice helps me to determine if I have a story or just an idea.

 What do you do at this stage?  I would love to share your ideas with readers.

Your Assignment:

This week take your original idea and test it by developing the scene or characters to help you determine if you do have a story or just and idea.

 Next week – developing characters.

 Happy writing,

 Virginia

Quiet Saturday

Posted in Uncategorized on January 24th, 2010 by Virginia — 1 Comment so far

It feels as if we are stuck in the middle of a horror movie, here in Iowa. A foggy mist hovers over the landscape hiding the sun.  I can’t remember the last time I noticed sunshine. The warmer temperatures and rain today did manage to melt some of the snow and thank goodness we didn’t have a deluge like they were predicting.  A local weather person made it sound like we would have major flooding.  So glad it didn’t happen.  I live in a two story house with lots of angles on the roof.  Several times during the day, ice rumbled off the roof and crashed onto the back yard. 

Last week one of my writer friends put a photo of a huge icicle hanging off her house.  My first thought was that it would be a perfect murder weapon.  You could grab it, stab someone and as long as they were inside the house, you could leave and let it melt. Voila, no weapon.  I do think someone did something similar in an old mystery I’d read once.  That’s what I like about writing mysteries. You can come up with such devious ideas but it’s okay because it’s all fiction.

Speaking of ice falling off the roof.  It was so loud, it scared our son’s cat, Sadie so bad that she ran out of his room to sit by my side while I worked in my office. She gave me an accusing look as if I’d done something wrong.   She’s a tortie with an attitude.  Loves both my husband and my son, Jason but she can’t seem to warm up to me.  We tease Jason about having a stalker.  She rarely leaves his sight and always seems to be watching him with a dreamy look on her face. This evening,  Steve and I were watching a movie in the family room.  Jason was gone for the evening and in one outdoors scene bird song filled the room.  Sadie ran all the way downstairs and sat watching the television, hoping to see a bird.  Besides ignoring me, she spends an inordinate amount of time sitting on the window sill in the living room bird watching.  Sometimes she gets so excited, she makes a little barking sound. The only time she is nice to me is when her food bowl is empty. After I fill it, she again gives me the cold shoulder.

Hoping to get together with my friend Sara for a chat tomorrow.  Also plan to post my week 5 on novel writing blog but that may not happen before Monday.

Virginia